Monday, March 22, 2010

Confused Cloud

This morning there was a piece of cloud in my eye. A bit of damp separated from itself.

On the ground it's chaos. Drizzle, mist, fog... all the wrong words.

It's far more important when it gets its act together and rises into the sky where it's supposed to live.

How do you give a cloud directions?

12 comments:

  1. Beautiful sentiment...but watch your possessives.

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  2. THANKS FRAN!!!!!!

    Too early for me. ;)

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  3. I just resign myself to the cloud with a sigh and keep moving in hopes it will dissipate allowing some sunshine through.

    Monday Blues...sorry

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  4. I give the cloud its space and I hope that it moves on soon.

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  5. Wonderfully written. Being a morning person, I am fortunate to have lots more better days. When it does happen, I try to just roll with the punches knowing that changing my mindset will help alter the ill feelings.

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  6. Beautiful! I think a cloud needs its space and then it can be blown away. Good luck!

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  7. I usually just keep writing through the cloud and eventually the mist drifts away.

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  8. Use it as a writing prompt!

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  9. I'd kick the cloud and tell it to get off my lawn. But that's me. I'm not very eloquent...you, on the other hand, are. Thanks!

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  10. sunshine will sometimes shoo the clouds away.

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  11. I blow the cloud away like a kiss and hope my good wishes return to me.

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